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J- Jose is a really energetic person.His face resembles Dory from "Finding Nemo" there are times when we call him Dory, but he doesn't really mind, all he does is laugh it off.
A- Allan is really outgoing in whatever he does.He loves playing sports like basketball,soccer and table tennis.He could be really naughty at times but once you get to know him he's actually helpful towards projects.
E- Edsa is a tall girl,she really likes Math since it's her ace subject and as for a non academic subject she likes art.She's picky with the food she eats, however when it comes to sweets she'll never say no.
Y- Ysabel is treated as an older sister.She's very caring towards her classmates and she's the perfect person to get advices from when it comes to liking someone.Added to that she has a wonderful singing voice.
L- Luis is a friendly guy.He's known to be a great swimmer in our batch, however he stopped in his training to explore other sports.Which is why at the moment he is training to be better at playing badminton.
From now on we would be addressing ourselves J.A.E.Y.L. and we look forward to your reading our next entries.
Hello there J.A.E.Y.L.! (whatever those letters stand for). Here are your scores for the very first post:
ReplyDeleteContent - 7/10
Coherence - 4/5
Creativity - 3/5
Voice - 3/5
Mechanics - 4/5
Text Layout - 5/5
Graphics & Multimedia - 3/5
Intellectual Honesty - 4/5
TOTAL: 33/45
Your blog is very refreshing to the eyes because of the color that you've used; it's easy to read. The layout is perfect and the use of font, font size, color, and other technical aspects are commendable. In spite of that, I hope that you will explore more on the side of your creative writing. Your introduction is too safe. I can't seem to find any element of creativity on it. I hope that you will challenge yourselves next time as you write your second post.